Thursday, April 14, 2011

Untitled #2

The sting of my pen draws me closer
Every time, the pain two-fold,
Surrounded by intricate context,
If only you could record what you see,
As you delve into the chasms I call me
With every word I write, the pain subsides,
Even though these papercuts steal my passion,
Dripping ink from all your injuries,
At least it's not the bloodshed of yesterday


Poem 17
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17 comments:

  1. Brandon SampleApril 14, 2011 at 7:41 PM

    pretty traumatic stuff

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  2. izzfoshizzzApril 15, 2011 at 1:13 AM

    very deep bro

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  3. FugaziApril 15, 2011 at 1:54 AM

    On a poem related note. One time at school my friend wrote a poem and the teacher called him out on it and said he plagiarized it. Long story short it took him 2 weeks to get the A he deserved, but I do not know how you can really grade poetry.

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  4. gmanApril 15, 2011 at 2:46 AM

    nice imagery there.

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  5. J.R.April 15, 2011 at 3:00 AM

    I especially like the last two lines

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  6. DisposedCheeseApril 15, 2011 at 4:00 AM

    This is so powerful

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  7. DogShepApril 15, 2011 at 11:37 AM

    I know you don't write for publicity... but you should get published!

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  8. Todd AndrewsApril 15, 2011 at 12:18 PM

    Dripping ink from my vagina,
    At least I'm not a hipster

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  9. Aamir MuhammadApril 15, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    amazing, poetry.

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  10. AlexandraApril 16, 2011 at 1:31 AM

    so amazing! :-)

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  11. PotholderzApril 16, 2011 at 7:10 AM

    Once again, another beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing like always.

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  12. AndyApril 16, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    symbolizes you and your passion for writing, and how you express yourself through it. good stuff.

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  13. Green_MagixApril 16, 2011 at 3:36 PM

    Loved it mate!

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  14. Giles! MoxyApril 17, 2011 at 8:58 PM

    Keep them coming!

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  15. MarianApril 18, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    you've got some talent!

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  16. dsApril 21, 2011 at 5:01 PM

    Another nice one!

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  17. DaveApril 22, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    I love poetry

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