Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Fate

Expend what little air left exhaling,
My lungs collapsing as I drown
Time wasted trying too hard to prevent
That which is accidental,
And inevitable seeking,
No other meanings
Intelligence is an enemy,
Setting traps into your void
Your heart will not last forever,
No matter how hard you try and lie;
Even the wise are subject to destiny


Poem 10
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15 comments:

  1. MikeApril 6, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    Wow man that was all over the place - Thanks for sharing :) was looking for the suffocation analogy all the way through but you kind of lost me

    Following

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  2. 3DS-GamesApril 6, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    Nice poem!

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  3. D22 ZoneApril 6, 2011 at 5:56 PM

    Your work on this blog is great! keep it up!

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  4. CandesenceApril 6, 2011 at 6:20 PM

    You write these yourself, it pretty neat coming across stuff like this.

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  5. Ghost Of SwayzeApril 6, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    i really like it! keep it up =]

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  6. NateApril 6, 2011 at 6:53 PM

    these are really good. nice work

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  7. MikeApril 6, 2011 at 7:22 PM

    You've got a creative mind, that's good. I look forward to more posts.

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  8. AnonymousApril 6, 2011 at 8:25 PM

    great stuff man, keep it up! :) following and supporting!

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  9. doomsdayApril 6, 2011 at 8:27 PM

    very nice poem!

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  10. J. AntonioApril 7, 2011 at 3:33 AM

    Very nice poem...
    Thanks for sharing

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  11. Leo StahlApril 7, 2011 at 10:46 AM

    Very nice poem. Great way to start the day.
    I noticed you've got the same name as the French prankster Remi Gaillard, legend!

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  12. A70 8TracApril 7, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    you've got some nice poetry here. I think one of my other friends might enjoy this blog as well. Will have to send it to her!

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  13. munchies?April 7, 2011 at 10:56 AM

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  14. munchies?April 7, 2011 at 10:57 AM

    Ups double-posted for some reason. Sorry!

    Nice poem, how do you get your inspiration?

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  15. TIFOTIApril 7, 2011 at 1:43 PM

    "Even the wise are subject to destiny"

    Love that part. Keep going.

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