Monday, April 11, 2011

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Your new sleek sophistication,
Gives way to new inspiration
You are who you are for but a day,
Tomorrow's expectations falling through
Even the conductor's greatest symphony,
You'll pass by with a fleeting eye
It matters not to you,
It will never be loud enough for your tastes

Why do you hide your pretty face with masks?
You spend so much time making it perfect
Satisfaction a forgotten word,
I had not the time to wait and see
As your mask became a part of you,
I lost all of me


Poem 15
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21 comments:

  1. JohnApril 11, 2011 at 5:20 PM

    I like that line about making your face pretty, but then hiding it with masks. That's deep.

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  2. chupyApril 11, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    nice poetry i really feel it

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  3. AndyApril 11, 2011 at 6:06 PM

    really good.

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  4. derApril 11, 2011 at 6:40 PM

    Wow, I really like this. Nice work.

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  5. MikeApril 11, 2011 at 6:43 PM

    Always be yourself :)

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  6. ChrisApril 11, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    beautiful poem. love it.

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  7. Giles! MoxyApril 11, 2011 at 9:59 PM

    Id be all like nice this that and the other..
    but its a really sad poem and I just dont feel right..

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  8. lacrossemanApril 11, 2011 at 10:18 PM

    i like your poetry

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  9. NaxorrøApril 12, 2011 at 12:25 AM

    Hi remi, beautiful poem dude ;_;

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  10. JamesApril 12, 2011 at 12:34 AM

    Very nice

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  11. J.R.April 12, 2011 at 3:50 AM

    I really like your work

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  12. modernbApril 12, 2011 at 7:07 AM

    Untitled?! What is this? :D Good poem though

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  13. millasApril 12, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    i kept thinking about hipsters while reading.. weird?
    good work though ! :D

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  14. gmanApril 12, 2011 at 11:26 AM

    it's easy to be honest when you are hiding behind a mask...

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  15. dsApril 12, 2011 at 12:32 PM

    Nice poems you got here.

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  16. miousApril 12, 2011 at 3:09 PM

    I liked it :)

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  17. DogShepApril 12, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    Love it! Keep the poems coming, makes a nice break to my day.

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  18. Green_MagixApril 12, 2011 at 5:37 PM

    Love it mate

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  19. DrewApril 12, 2011 at 6:14 PM

    That was surprisingly good, very well done.
    Followed.

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  20. ZipApril 12, 2011 at 9:29 PM

    About a girl?

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  21. PotholderzApril 13, 2011 at 12:33 AM

    That was really good, i identified with the mask part a lot.

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