Monday, April 11, 2011

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Your new sleek sophistication,
Gives way to new inspiration
You are who you are for but a day,
Tomorrow's expectations falling through
Even the conductor's greatest symphony,
You'll pass by with a fleeting eye
It matters not to you,
It will never be loud enough for your tastes

Why do you hide your pretty face with masks?
You spend so much time making it perfect
Satisfaction a forgotten word,
I had not the time to wait and see
As your mask became a part of you,
I lost all of me


Poem 15

21 comments:

  1. I like that line about making your face pretty, but then hiding it with masks. That's deep.

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  2. nice poetry i really feel it

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  3. Wow, I really like this. Nice work.

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  4. Id be all like nice this that and the other..
    but its a really sad poem and I just dont feel right..

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  5. Hi remi, beautiful poem dude ;_;

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  6. Untitled?! What is this? :D Good poem though

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  7. i kept thinking about hipsters while reading.. weird?
    good work though ! :D

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  8. it's easy to be honest when you are hiding behind a mask...

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  9. Love it! Keep the poems coming, makes a nice break to my day.

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  10. That was surprisingly good, very well done.
    Followed.

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  11. That was really good, i identified with the mask part a lot.

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