Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Fate

Expend what little air left exhaling,
My lungs collapsing as I drown
Time wasted trying too hard to prevent
That which is accidental,
And inevitable seeking,
No other meanings
Intelligence is an enemy,
Setting traps into your void
Your heart will not last forever,
No matter how hard you try and lie;
Even the wise are subject to destiny


Poem 10

15 comments:

  1. Wow man that was all over the place - Thanks for sharing :) was looking for the suffocation analogy all the way through but you kind of lost me

    Following

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  2. Your work on this blog is great! keep it up!

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  3. You write these yourself, it pretty neat coming across stuff like this.

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  4. these are really good. nice work

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  5. You've got a creative mind, that's good. I look forward to more posts.

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  6. great stuff man, keep it up! :) following and supporting!

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  7. Very nice poem...
    Thanks for sharing

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  8. Very nice poem. Great way to start the day.
    I noticed you've got the same name as the French prankster Remi Gaillard, legend!

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  9. you've got some nice poetry here. I think one of my other friends might enjoy this blog as well. Will have to send it to her!

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  11. Ups double-posted for some reason. Sorry!

    Nice poem, how do you get your inspiration?

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  12. "Even the wise are subject to destiny"

    Love that part. Keep going.

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